Happy Poetry Friday, everyone! Molly at Nix the Comfort Zone is our lovely hostess this week. I had the great good fortune to meet Molly IRL, as they say, a couple of weeks ago at Heinemann’s annual teacher tour in Portsmouth, NH. Molly and I have been chatting through comments here on PF, on our Tuesday Slices, and in the TeachWrite Facebook community for some time. It was fun to finally meet face to face, albeit for just a short time…this time!
Molly has been crafting the most gorgeous sonnet for some time now, and it’s finally ready for it’s debut. Don’t miss it! You’ll be swept away by The Solace of the Ocean.
One of my goals for the summer was to try different types of writing (tipping my hat to you, Jennifer Laffin!), including new poetry forms. A golden shovel was on my hit list — taking a line from someone else’s poem and then using each word in that line as the last word of each line of the new poem. But which poem to borrow a line from?
I’ve been talking a lot about notebooks this summer with the goddess of writing notebooks, Michelle Haseltine, the TeachWrite community, and on other social media venues, so notebooks it is! Who better to borrow from then Ralph Fletcher, one of the pied pipers of the students-using-writing-notebooks community. His poem, It’s a Place, was the perfect fit. (Click the link to read his original text.)
So here it is, my first golden shovel, borrowing from Ralph’s first line, “Why am I keeping this notebook.”
Poetry challenge reminder: I’m hosting Poetry Friday next week, on August 17. I threw a bird-related poem challenge out last week to anyone willing to fly along. Your poem can be about any bird you like, or birds in general. It can be in any form you like. Just wing it! If you are stumped, take a look at all the bird-related wonders on Wonderopolis.org. Choose one and create a “found” poem by highlighting key words, or why not try a “blackout poem,” crossing out/covering up unused words.
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Thanks for visiting and join us for some Poetry Friday fun!
I enjoy doing golden shovel poems. I like how they honor the original poet, but find their own direction. I love your metaphor of gems from a mine found in your notebook. I typically use my notebook for drafting. Revising happens when I type it. Nevertheless, my notebook is a place to be messy and imperfect, in other words, the real me.
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Agreed! I scribble and draft in it. Still trying to figure out a system to keep it all organized. That will come, I suspect.
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Golden shovel poems are so fun. I know you grappled with it, but you rocked it!!! You’ve also inspired me not only with your excellent poem but with the call to join you next week. I already have a rough draft on one of my favorite birds sitting in a notebook. Maybe it’s time to polish it off. Thanks, Christie!
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Thanks, Amy! It really was fun. So excited to see your poem hatch next week!
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Congrats on your first golden shovel! Well done! It’s an especially apt form considering your mining/quarrying analogy–which I love! Thanks for the kind words about my sonnet and for the invitation to write some bird poetry for next week. I’m in!
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LOL! I didn’t even make that connection. Good for you for spotting it!
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There’s lots of goodness in this post, Christie: Ralph’s poem, your notebook Golden Shovel (1st time congratulations), shoutout to Wonderopolis, and a creative challenge). I’m excited to create and read everyone’s poetry.
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I’m honored to be part of this brilliant poem. I’ve read it half a dozen times already and each time I love it more and more. I find golden shovel poems so challenging. You made this look easy! Way to go!!!
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Aw man. Thanks!
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“To be quarried like gemstones…” brilliant!
Great job on your first golden shovel poem. I haven’t tried one yet, but you’ve inspired me to put it on my “to do” list. : )
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Thank you, Linda!
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oooooh….I love the gemstones. Beautiful. This is a solid golden shovel.
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“To be quarried like gemstones” (#metoo…can I use this hashtag for something positive? I hope so…)
My poem today was quarried from my notebook. It was an abandoned first draft from a poem that went nowhere. I left behind the metaphor and tried writing reality and got bogged down. Lesson: sometimes you should just stick with the metaphor even if it can mean a thousand things and not the exact thing you were trying to say.
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Yes! 🙂
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Very nice! I’m looking forward to the birds next week. Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
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Great Golden Shovel poem! I find it a difficult form to write, but it is so satisfying when it comes together.
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Your golden shovel flows effortlessly, and your last line is a jewel,
“To be quarried like gemstones from my notebook.”
Thanks Christie!
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I’m always in awe of people who achieve such perfection on their first try.
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Love that gemstones image! Looking forward to next week – thanks!
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